I really like how you give a choice - though maybe not everyone realizes this unless they are used to your films. It is fun going back and seeing it again to see what happens with the other character. Also, now that I know better, i keep busy with other things until the movie is entirely downloaded. Then there are no problems seeing and hearing it.
The speed is fine now. Thank god! That old one was godawful [see, I can give you a bad crit when you deserve it!]
The new views and camera moves help, too.
Okay - PigPEN gave me away. Yes, I am prejudiced in his favor having given birth to him. But it is about time he made that worth something [lol]!
I mean I still can't forget the 10 hours of labor so hard that I couldn't breathe - or talk [and that's SAYING something!]
Then - according to his sister - a grey slimy ugly pruny creature appeared and she ran from the room.
Okay - that aside I have a least a few qualifications to crit his work, but it's tru I don't really spend enough time on here to check everyone out. Maybe come summer I'll have more time since my work hours change.
Till then I can honestly say he's my fav here ... and this particular one was damned funny!
You have a way with words. There is not much action here, but the lines are really funny. Even though some might say downright rude, it's not the "toilet " humor that I like, it's the way you come up with unique slants on how to say something "rude" in your own way.
I personally thought this one was the funniest of the five.
The bird bit is really funny -also "spidey"
I agree with others that the download on these sprite movies you're doing these days is pretty frustrating, but once it's downloaded all the way, this one is the best of the three with the most to see.
I think you need to get back to your own drawings and keep up with the scripting. Your strengths are funny puns, visual humor, and timing music to movements. Don't lose the early strengths trying to be "polished'.
It would be good to let newbies know somehow that you click on the words. But how about some different interactivity?
I really love your credits! Would love to see more PRODUCE FLICKS - yeah food.
waterbaby
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All 4 flash Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 2, 2003
What an improved version!
I really like how you give a choice - though maybe not everyone realizes this unless they are used to your films. It is fun going back and seeing it again to see what happens with the other character. Also, now that I know better, i keep busy with other things until the movie is entirely downloaded. Then there are no problems seeing and hearing it.
The speed is fine now. Thank god! That old one was godawful [see, I can give you a bad crit when you deserve it!]
The new views and camera moves help, too.
Rated 5 / 5 stars March 2, 2003
The best yet!
Okay - PigPEN gave me away. Yes, I am prejudiced in his favor having given birth to him. But it is about time he made that worth something [lol]!
I mean I still can't forget the 10 hours of labor so hard that I couldn't breathe - or talk [and that's SAYING something!]
Then - according to his sister - a grey slimy ugly pruny creature appeared and she ran from the room.
Okay - that aside I have a least a few qualifications to crit his work, but it's tru I don't really spend enough time on here to check everyone out. Maybe come summer I'll have more time since my work hours change.
Till then I can honestly say he's my fav here ... and this particular one was damned funny!
STOP REVEIWING MOM!!!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 5, 2003
No - this one is funnier!
You have a way with words. There is not much action here, but the lines are really funny. Even though some might say downright rude, it's not the "toilet " humor that I like, it's the way you come up with unique slants on how to say something "rude" in your own way.
I personally thought this one was the funniest of the five.
Looking forward to #6.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 30, 2003
The bird bit is really funny -also "spidey"
I agree with others that the download on these sprite movies you're doing these days is pretty frustrating, but once it's downloaded all the way, this one is the best of the three with the most to see.
I think you need to get back to your own drawings and keep up with the scripting. Your strengths are funny puns, visual humor, and timing music to movements. Don't lose the early strengths trying to be "polished'.
It would be good to let newbies know somehow that you click on the words. But how about some different interactivity?
I really love your credits! Would love to see more PRODUCE FLICKS - yeah food.